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I was really, really board... when I wrote this. It's a story about... Gaia. I couldn't think of anything else, and it wasn't the... worst... story idea I've ever come up with. So ya tell me what you think, I honestly don't care if you flame, but I would prefer you didn't.
It kind of has some bad language and one or two suggestive lines; it's not as bad as some.

PS I had two cups of coffee while I was writing this, so that might give you a few answers.

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I walked around Barton town away from the Barton Boutique, past the water fountain and to the jewelry store. Upon entering the small store my eyes fell on some really hot, really expensive sunglasses.
"Oh I would kill for a pair of those shades," I wined. Of coarse having only one eye kind of put a damper on that dream.
My tail flicked back and forth as Agatha glared at me. I had this nasty habit of knocking things over; obviously she didn't want anything broken.
Not long after, I left, she was really starting to piss me off, almost as much as that perky cow from the Isle de Gambino, what was her name... oh right, Sasha uuuugh so dense. That and with 444 g there was very little I could afford, that I actually wanted, I mean who needs 3300 g ballerina circlet?
I left Barton town and went to sit on a bench in west field. I looked at the clothes I had just bought that afternoon.
"Three shirts I'll never wear, two pants and three skirts I'll never wear, a pair of shoes I bought on impulse to go with a shirt and skirt I'll never wear, and one hat, that was really cool... maybe I'll wear it."
I sighed; I really have to stop doing that, I have no money to begin with. Two kids ran by me shrieking and giggling, groaning I muttered and glared at them with little effect.
Not to long ago I got my very own, albeit crumby, apartment and I had my friends over...not a wise thing to do, I was still feeling the effects of last night, hangovers were not fun. But the party itself was fun; I mean who knew Mehiko was such a party animal when she was totally hammered.
I was sitting quietly staring off into space when an old newspaper flew gently by. Grabbing it I read the headline, It was about Gambinos Tower. I wasn't here when that happened so I had no clue what was going on (I was visiting my cousin, whyme_go, in Neopidea and I got to stay at the Habbo hotel, which was very nice I might add.)
I read the newspaper and didn't notice the shadow over head.
"HI AKI!!!!" I nearly jumped out of my god damned skin. Looking up I saw one of my best friends, Sakura114.
"Damn Sakura do you have to scare me like that?"
"Of coarse it's my birth right."
"Like hell you weirdo," she just grinned at me and jumped onto the bench beside me. She hugged me and giggled loudly.
"Sakura can you be quite, just a bit?"
"Head hurting?"
"No. s**t."
"Oh sorry," she said whispering loudly, "Do you want me to shut up? Because I know when to shut up, you don't have to tell me twice, I'm good that way. Some people just can't get it through their heads when to shut up, but not me no sir-ey, I don't have to be told twice, never, never, never."
"I hate you sometimes." Her only reply was a wide grin and another tight hug.
I could hear the sounds of feet and looked just in time to get mauled by a few more of my evil hyperactive friends, Lia Fail, Kena_wlfdmn, and the twins Mehiko and Yasiko.
"Mehiko haven't seen you since the party." Lia said grinning
"Shut. Up."
"Awe are you embarrassed?"
"SHUT UP!" we laughed at her before turning on Yasiko.
"How's Cloud?" I asked. Ahhh Cloud_MattX, he was a nice guy, I never really met him but I have talked to him and he seems nice enough.
"Is he good?" Kena asked grinning and nudging her. Yasiko turned three shades of red
"Ask that again and I will beat you down!" she yelped.
"She looks like she has something to hide" Lia said thoughtfully.
"I must agree with Lia, Yasiko are you not telling us something?" Sakura said.
"ALL OF YOU CAN GO TO HELL!"
I smiled, even when my head hurts so much I'm praying for death, even when I realize I barley have enough money for food and yet I spend it on clothes that I will never wear, I have no job, I live in a crumby apartment, and I'm pathetically single, these guys can always cheer me up. Grinning I joined in on pestering poor Yasiko.
"Well are you going to tell us if he's good or not?" *nudge nudge*
"AKI!"
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Ya don't know if I'll add anything to it, can't really think of anything else... if any one has any ideas I would be glad to hear them.

~Aki~
I like it but i am sure i already told you that. blaugh
It's not that bad, could use a bit of editing, but still very good. mrgreen
Prose subforum. Thank you.
mrgreen xd wow people are reading my story, not many but hey.
Interesting heart
i love it, but i said that before...when you made me read it in the hallway with 100 people trying to get past us!...but its not like i'm complaining or anything....(aka: i like it but did you have to pick on me?) xp
Yes
lol thanx anyway
I REEEEAAAALLLLLLYYYY liked it! By the way, I dunno if you want to do this or not, but...

One time I was reading this .hack (its and anime) fanfic and the aruther had her OC in a a big place, almost like a city.... So, when she updated her fic, she posted this little profile thingy that we could fill out and then send it to her and be writen into the fic! Maybe you should try that. biggrin Yeah, you know I'm just trying to sneak into your fic cuz its so good, LOL! wink
thanx redface redface smile biggrin xd
M'kay. Lets get this out into the open: I don't like first person. o.o Sorry, just saying that before you think I am being harsh. I don't mean to be, I just don't.

Alrightie, I'll spell check for ya!
Well the only reason it's in first person is because it's from the point of view of my avatar. It was going to be in third person but I changed my mind. xp

As for spell checking, I use microsoft word, but having a second opinion would be nice. smile
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!

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