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I would love some comments!

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*is bored* bump

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Well. . .your story was a shy bit away from being okay. To me at least, I came to the realization that it was a mere plot summary than a real story. You should rewrite some part of it into a more descriptive action driven story. Describe sounds the characters hear in the mansion, describe. With a some minor adjustments it should be real good. And also, I am just taking a stab, but the vamps name is lucifer right? I clicked this because i wanted to read a story about the angel. O well i dont really care. Keep writing!!!!

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i would like more comments

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Why can't i see my first post! gonk

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someone please quote my first post so i can see it gonk xd
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