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Zaryukei · 2004-09-08T08:47:03-07:00

[img]http://img20.exs.cx/img20/6205/SP01.jpg[/img] [img]http://img20.exs.cx/img20/5724/SP02.jpg[/img] [img]http://img40.exs.cx/img40/623/SP3.jpg[/img] [img]http://img20.exs.cx/img20/7696/SP04.jpg[/img] [img]http://img20.exs.cx/img20/6396/SP05.jpg[/img] [img]http://img20.exs.cx/img20/7053/SP06.jpg[/img] [img]http://img88.exs.cx/img88/5650/SP07.jpg[/img] [img]http://img88.exs.cx/img88/2962/SP08.jpg[/img] [img]http://img88.exs.cx/img88/2654/SP09.jpg[/img] [img]http://img88.exs.cx/img88/...

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Post: 3658715_1 created on Wed, 08 Sep 2004 16:47:03 +0000
Posted: Wed, 08 Sep 2004 16:47:03 +0000

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Post: 3658715_2 created on Wed, 08 Sep 2004 16:57:15 +0000
Posted: Wed, 08 Sep 2004 16:57:15 +0000

Wooo. Thats pretty nice work. Your anatomy could use a llittle work in some places, like the first panel (The female looks like she is about to break and fall over) Descent all around, though. You have dynamic angles and poses. I barely saw any static panels, and the panels are very neat and uniform. "Experts" love that. I especially like the seen when theyre fighting their way through the access tunnel. Thats a shot a professional would use (b^.'). Even the text helps move the page along. I want to know whos little black book of secrets you stole ninja Background is missing in a few panels, but in all the others, you have good perspective. It seems like youve gotten almost all of the hard things out of the way. Now all you need to do is work on your style and consistancy a bit, and that just comes with time (or by accident stare )
I want to see more, keep it coming!

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Post: 3658715_3 created on Wed, 08 Sep 2004 17:15:34 +0000
Posted: Wed, 08 Sep 2004 17:15:34 +0000

@______@

Wow.

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Post: 3658715_4 created on Wed, 08 Sep 2004 17:15:58 +0000
Posted: Wed, 08 Sep 2004 17:15:58 +0000

more more!!!

its really very very very very good art

(i think i sound like a noob sweatdrop )
but its a comic which would be worth to buy

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Post: 3658715_5 created on Wed, 08 Sep 2004 18:57:10 +0000
Posted: Wed, 08 Sep 2004 18:57:10 +0000

DoggieSmile

more more!!!

its really very very very very good art

(i think i sound like a noob sweatdrop )
but its a comic which would be worth to buy

thank you guys^^

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Post: 3658715_6 created on Wed, 08 Sep 2004 20:49:22 +0000
Posted: Wed, 08 Sep 2004 20:49:22 +0000

Dragonlust

sweatdrop sweatdrop

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Post: 3658715_7 created on Wed, 08 Sep 2004 22:31:24 +0000
Posted: Wed, 08 Sep 2004 22:31:24 +0000

You're good. I have to give that a 9/10. I think all the points have been expressed by Dragonlust already so I do not need to repeat them. Great work. Huge potential too.

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Post: 3658715_8 created on Wed, 08 Sep 2004 23:21:04 +0000
Posted: Wed, 08 Sep 2004 23:21:04 +0000

i REALLY enjoyed! too bad the rest isn't put up, i was wondering what was going to happen... lol. yeah i wish i was that good. ive been in the mood to make a comic/manga just haven't... lol ive made a really short one, but it SUCKS! blaugh lmao. newaz keep it up! your really good! xd

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Post: 3658715_9 created on Wed, 08 Sep 2004 23:21:11 +0000
Posted: Wed, 08 Sep 2004 23:21:11 +0000

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wow that is b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Post: 3658715_10 created on Thu, 09 Sep 2004 00:54:06 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Sep 2004 00:54:06 +0000

plz snip the pictures
to anyone else thank you for you support blaugh

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Post: 3658715_11 created on Thu, 09 Sep 2004 01:53:42 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Sep 2004 01:53:42 +0000

they look really good, just make sure all of the words are straight across, just some of them are a little slanted. but it still looks good, keep up the good work

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Post: 3658715_12 created on Thu, 09 Sep 2004 01:56:45 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Sep 2004 01:56:45 +0000

*can't believe someone didn't snip that huge comic*
*cough* that was so AWESOMEISH but now my eyes hurt...from reading that...er...those...words! x.x but other than that, *thumbs up*

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Post: 3658715_13 created on Thu, 09 Sep 2004 01:58:01 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Sep 2004 01:58:01 +0000

Your anatomy is shakey... boobs arn't that big... and cat people in space..... doesn't peak my intrest. Nice lines thou... and verry consistant.

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Post: 3658715_14 created on Thu, 09 Sep 2004 02:00:26 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Sep 2004 02:00:26 +0000

Parade

Your anatomy is shakey... boobs arn't that big... and cat people in space..... doesn't peak my intrest. Nice lines thou... and verry consistant.

how huge boobs got to be is a decision of the drawer, cat people in space, why not? and who cares if youre interested?

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Post: 3658715_15 created on Thu, 09 Sep 2004 03:57:30 +0000
Posted: Thu, 09 Sep 2004 03:57:30 +0000

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Parade

Your anatomy is shakey... boobs arn't that big... and cat people in space..... doesn't peak my intrest. Nice lines thou... and verry consistant.

how huge boobs got to be is a decision of the drawer, cat people in space, why not? and who cares if youre interested?

yup^^

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