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. razz ast Legacies Corp. Concept Contest: Part Two:.
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Rules:
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-This will be a formal style RP
-Posting is allowed by Lord Zexion, Faewynd and Prosper Reed/Yiiei only.
-IC posts ONLY in this thread. The exception being if you are leaving for the night and post a notice, etc. Questions should be directed to the main thread, not through pm.

Thats it as far as rules go. Everything else comes down to your own skill and how much you know. However, bear in mind that this is a contest, so play to impress!


The Scenario:
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Detention? On your second day of class? Silly freshmen...
This RP will take place in the detention hall on the legacies second day of High School.



The Concept Legacy:
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The Family Legacy: The Genie from Aladdin

Account History: Back many years ago in the time where the world was still trying to get on its feet. There was one man known widely for his skills at making pots. One day it is said an old beggar came up to him and asked if he would make him a pot to store some things. Usually the man named Levi charged 100 gold pieces for a pot. This time he made an exception and allowed the beggar to only have to pay 38 coins for the pot.
Happy the beggar received his pot one day. Unlike other pots this one was shaped weirdly. It looked like the perfect thing to use for a lamp. Sadly the beggar took it to a mage to have it cursed. It was cursed with one spell that if the lamped was rubbed it would release what ever was inside.
Taking the lamp to his home the beggar found the Genie had was keeping captive. “Genie I want you to enter this lamp.” Sadly the Genie did as he was told and was stuck inside the lamp.
The old man soon died and the lamp was lost forever. Recently though the lamp was found under an old house. It was soon given to the Edo family which kept the Lamp safe in a vault. Soon losing the Lamp again Reaven Edo researched to find that the old beggar he had heard of was his Great, Great, Great, Great Grandfather. Wanting to learn more of the history he knew the Lamp belonged to him.

Owner: Kairi Edo

Legacy's Name: Reaven
Legacy's Sex: Male
Legacy's Ability: He has the ability to make things out of nothing, but it consumes a great deal of energy. Just like Genie
Legacy's Personality: The legacy starts out as a quite and reserved child and mainly maintains that personality throughout his whole life.
Legacy's Appearance:
Head: Reaven’s hair extends a little past the middle of his neck. It is not tidy at all it is messy most of the part. His eyes are viewable most of the time. His hair as he gets older extends a little but never past his shoulders. Though his eyes are sometimes covered by hair he can still see. His expression is pretty basic. It looks as though he is calm and relaxed. His hair though is like a blue with some gold streaks going through it. He also has one Blue Eye and one Gold Colored one. His skin tone is pretty basic. It is a tan color; not to dark, but not light either.

Torso: Reaven wears a white T-Shirt that is a little too big for him it seems while he is a child. He also has on a blue jacket that is again to big for him while he is a child, though any stage after it fits fine. As he grows though so do his muscles. He is not all muscles but you can tell he has some on him. His Jacket goes a little past his waits and is kept open. It doesn’t have a zipper or buttons anyway. It doesn’t have any pockets either.

Legs: At the kid stage it looks like he is wearing a pair of pants that are a bit too big, which they are. Though when he reached the next stage they start to fit him like that should. There are no designs on the pants. They are a black color too. They are a bit loose throughout all the stages though, to show that he doesn’t like anything that sucks to his skin.

Overall: He is about 6 foot tall when he reaches his adult stage, meaning he is not short as a kid. He is not a giant either. Also Reaven has a pendent around his neck that looks like a blue shard. One thing to beware of if Reaven is ever to mad he will start to glow a light blue color. Other than that he looks like a normal person. The pendent is on a silver string. There is basically just a blue piece of crystal hanging from the necklace. It shows that Reaven is a Genie, and is not completely free.

Key's Name: Jasmine
Key's Species: Wolf
Key's Personality: Reserved but Energetic- Most of the time Jasmine is quite and calm but around Reaven she is hyper and always wanting to play with her.
Key's Appearance: The only thing that changes is that she gets bigger. Her basic fur colors are White, Gray, and Silver

Special Traits/Talents: There is a tattoo that starts at the hands of both arms and continues up his neck onto the bottom part of his face. They look like battle wounds but they are black not scars.

Important Concept Detail:
The only thing I have to say. Is that the story and everything is spoken from my point of view so it may be hard to understand. Just make sure to read carefully to Understand Kairi, Reaven, and Jasmine.

Include an Owner profile if you like: No Thank You


The Existing Legacy:

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Account History: Maid Marian
name: Sorcha
gender: female
ability: Perfect Aim
personality: Sorcha is an activist, an anarchist and a feminist. She is strongly opinionated and not afraid to shout somebody else down. Though publicly she often appears as quiet and demure, once you see her in her element or get her talking about something she's passionate about a whole new side of her opens up. Along with this comes the strong desire to do good and see justice in the world. (Or at least, justice as she sees fit more often than not.) One of her favorite activities is playing malicious pranks on those she feels are taking advantage of others.


key's name: Tuck
species: fox
personality: Tuck is a cheerful fox and he adores Sorcha. He is also crafty, sly, and for the most part without conscience. His influence on Sorcha is not great, he goads her into doing things she'd likely not do. But he would never hurt her and he wont tolerate seeing her hurt. Unquestioningly loyal and supportive to his Legacy, others are probably wise to steer clear.

[.Reaven.]

Reaven walked into the detention hall unaware of what he had done. It was only the second day of school and he felt like a huge fool to have already been given detention. Lifting his head up Reaven looked for a desk and found one in the back of the room. Walking to the back of the classroom he held his books close and his head in shame.

Adverting his eyes from everyone else's who was in detention he found his desk and sat down in it. Setting his books on the desk he waited to be given his detention assignment.

He kept wondering 'Who did I get detention from?' Though he thought yesterday through to the last detail and today as well, he had no idea who he had gotten it from. Was it from a teacher just to despise him? Was it some kid telling a lie and he got blamed for it? He had no Earthly idea, but he kept trying to think it through.

Devoted Cub

Sorcha didn't walk into the detention hall. She strutted, as if proud of being there. Proud of causing trouble, proud of bringing chaos into the classroom. Hell, she mused to herself. If you're gonna do detention, do it right. I've got nothing to be ashamed of. Her mother wouldn't have agreed, but her mother wasn't there. Shifting her bookbag onto her shoulder, she made her way to the back of the room. There appeared to be only one other student in detention so far, and the teacher didn't look like he was going to be paying any kind of attention to them. Dropping her things carelessly onto the chair, Sorcha perched on the desk top and looked over at the other kid. "Hi" she said cheerfully. "What're you in for?"

[.Reaven.]

"H...Hi," Reaven said smiling "I don't know what I am in here for." Looking back to his desk Reaven let his hair fall in front of his face. Looking up at the girl he smiled "My name is Reaven." Trying to sound as friendly as possible Reaven tried to keep his eyes on her, but they kept wandering off. In his mind he was trying to remind himself to stay calm and act friendly, not to act shy was his top goal at the moment.

Devoted Cub

Sorcha frowned slightly, people who didn't make eye contact always made her feel suspicious. Nevertheless, she shrugged it off and extended a hand in greeting. "Sorcha." She introduced herself. "You really don't know why you're here? Usually they tell you. Maybe theres a plot against you..." She knew it was a ridiculous suggestion, but her imagination leapt at the idea despite her better judgement.

[.Reaven.]

Looking at her he smiled and laughed. "Thank You." he commented "Thank You for making me laugh. I haven't laughed in a long time." Looking at the teacher's desk he wondered why he or she, he couldn't tell, wern't doing anything. "By the way what are you in here?" he questioned looking at her. When she came in she was walking so hapily like she enjoyed it in here.

Devoted Cub

"Me? Oh.." Sorcha made a dismissive gesture and shrugged. "I was mouthing off in homeroom. "So, Reaven," She adjusted her perch on the desk and crossed her ankles in a lady like fashion that seemed to go against her brash nature. "Tell me about yourself."

[.Reaven.]

"Not much to say," he said looking at the girl "I just grew up with Kairi, my guardian should I say." Looking up at the empty desks in front of him he bowed his head. "I wonder what I did do." Reaven smiled and put his feet on the chair in the desk in front of him and pulled out a book. Starting to read he smiled a little and put the book aside. It was boring him to quickly. Pulling out a piece of paper he started to draw Sorcha in the stance she was in.

Devoted Cub

A bit of an antisocial, Sorcha noted to herself idly. Or perhaps merely lacking in social skills. Either way, she peered at the sketch he was working on curiously, wondering if the kid was any good. He didn't seem eager to share any personal details, or perhaps he merely didn't have the words to do so. Either way, she was disinclined to ask him anything else when she wasn't likely to get much of a response. Adjusting her position a bit so she could have a better view of his drawing, she sat and watched him for awhile. Sorcha was certain that if the boy decided he wanted to talk to her, he'd get around to saying something.

[.Reaven.]

Reaven looked over at the girl then back to his sketch. "You moved," he said forwning the finishing what part of her earlier post that he could remember. "Can you tell me a little about yourself?" he asked out of no where. He was a bit more social with her that he was with most. That was probaly because she was like him. She seemed to be a legacy.

Devoted Cub

Sorcha tried very hard to stay still for him, but she screwed her face up in a funny expression. She wasn't one who sat still very often and her pent up energy was almost palpable. "About me? Well, I'm an activist and I have a talking fox. At least, he talks to me but nobody else can hear him so some people think I'm kinda crazy. But really I'm just your average feminist. Then again... you knew that, I think. About the fox and me not being crazy." She gave him a shrewd look. "Does your mom let you take your key to school?"

"Yes she is here in my bag," he said opening it. Appearing in the bag wa a small wolf sleeping soundly. "She may have been how I got in trouble." Looking at the girl he petted Jasmine and thought about home. There wasn't much to due, but he could play with her there. Here in school pets wern't allowed

Devoted Cub

"Your mom lets you bring yours to school?" Sorcha looked into the bag enviously. "My mom won't let me anymore. It caused too much trouble." She failed to go into detail. A random fox running around biting people was considered odd in most circumstances. The bell rang and Sorcha glanced up. "Hey, thats the lunch bell!" She leapt to her feet. "It was great meeting you.. ah.. Reaven. Catch ya around!" With a little wave, Sorcha unleashed her all her pent-up dentention energy and sprinted towards the door as if someone had lit a fire under her butt.

((And now I'm going out of town. Yiiei will be taking over this RP.))

Reaven continued to sit in the desk as the bell rang and let out all the students for luch. Staring up he waited for the commotion in the hall to die down. Getting up he closed his bag ans swung it over his shoulder. Walking down the aisle he left the room and made his way down to the lunch room.
A young blonde woman with large rimmed glasses stepped out in front of Reaven. Her glasses glared the light from the ceiling lights and her arms where positioned on her hips. Looking down at the boy, she frowned.

"Reaven, please follow me into my office." She said then turned on her heels, the woman walked off to her office without a glance behind, expecting the boy to follow without further directions.

Veronica Cash began opened the door to office and went around behind her desk and sat down, an irritated frown disrupting her slim face.

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