Now, you know I'm not nice. So, if you don't want your feelings hurt, don't read the following statement.
Your poetry, as I suppose you call it, is all slapdash meter with a childish rhyme scheme, all the same. It's all syrupy and saccharine and it keeps me up at night. You could do yourself a great justice by mixing it up a bit and attempting something that is NOT fit for a children's book.
Awww, Thanks Requiem, but you should know i dont get my feelings hurt, im to smart for that. Plus im aiming for child/teen, most of the humor i imagine would be lost in the infant mind. Plus i have shared with adults and they seemed to liek it enough, that is, if they didnt pull their hair out because of the errors of grammar. = P its fun to annoy adults.
