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Yes! I want to hoard more of your work! 0.4 40.0% [ 2 ]
Yes! I want to ACTUALLY pay you for the art! 0 0.0% [ 0 ]
No, I think you need to improve more first. 0 0.0% [ 0 ]
No, I think you should stick to freebies. 0.2 20.0% [ 1 ]
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Greedy Shapeshifter

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Okay, this is a recycled thread. Here's the deal: you help me out, I give you art. Sound good?

Why am I doing this? The WIP sub forum in the Picture Post is too slow. Most of the time I don't get a critique until some days after I make it or a friend stops by. Since I might throw down a WIP commission here. . . Yeah. Speed, speed. >__>

To make sure I don't completely kill my hand, I'm asking for five different critiques for my WIP in exchange for your art.

Now, don't expect what I have on the WIP post to be the quality my freebies will be. My quality varies from time to time, but the more practice the better, right?

Please red line the WIP if you can.

5+ constructive critiques = your freebie is a one time deal. You may still help with current and future WIPs. I might even toss you another freebie as a thank you for helping again.

Emphasis on the red correction lines please. If you can't do that, please link to images that have similar perspective angles to the fix/suggestion in question. I have a set of references in hand from the start of my WIPs, having more to add to my "library" would be a lot of help for future images.

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Here's the current WIP that needs saving!

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Artist Notes: Actual coloring will come in later after all the basics have been worked out. Hopefully.

GO!

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neck is a tad long. shoulders are a bit too big. head is a little small. Do you want me to redline?

Other than that, everything's great. Nice fold definition, especially on the skirt and blue glove.

No free art necessary, I'll probably subscribe to this to help with your art.

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It's nice. But, the neck is giraffe long. She also looks like she's bound by the shoulders.
But, I like the pose all the same.

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neck is a tad long. shoulders are a bit too big. head is a little small. Do you want me to redline?

Other than that, everything's great. Nice fold definition, especially on the skirt and blue glove.

No free art necessary, I'll probably subscribe to this to help with your art.

Yes, red lines please. ;w;

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It's nice. But, the neck is giraffe long. She also looks like she's bound by the shoulders.
But, I like the pose all the same.

Since you're the first that wants art since Night doesn't. . . >o>

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I feel like I've seen you before? owo

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Lady Snookeroo
It's nice. But, the neck is giraffe long. She also looks like she's bound by the shoulders.
But, I like the pose all the same.

Since you're the first that wants art since Night doesn't. . . >o>

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I feel like I've seen you before? owo

Thanks, man!

Maybe. I went by two other names on this site: Melodic Cacophony and trillian_prefect.
But, I'd remember a username like yours, and I don't. I love Egyptian mythology.

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Lady Snookeroo
Black Witch of Ra
Lady Snookeroo
It's nice. But, the neck is giraffe long. She also looks like she's bound by the shoulders.
But, I like the pose all the same.

Since you're the first that wants art since Night doesn't. . . >o>

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I feel like I've seen you before? owo

Thanks, man!

Maybe. I went by two other names on this site: Melodic Cacophony and trillian_prefect.
But, I'd remember a username like yours, and I don't. I love Egyptian mythology.

*sorts through other freebie arts* I don't have you in here from before. Maybe I saw you while I was lurking around? owo

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Lady Snookeroo
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Lady Snookeroo
It's nice. But, the neck is giraffe long. She also looks like she's bound by the shoulders.
But, I like the pose all the same.

Since you're the first that wants art since Night doesn't. . . >o>

User Image

I feel like I've seen you before? owo

Thanks, man!

Maybe. I went by two other names on this site: Melodic Cacophony and trillian_prefect.
But, I'd remember a username like yours, and I don't. I love Egyptian mythology.

*sorts through other freebie arts* I don't have you in here from before. Maybe I saw you while I was lurking around? owo

More than likely. I'm somewhat of an unrecognised regular.

Greedy Shapeshifter

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Her neck is to long, and her shoulds are a tad to big other then that she looks great!

2/5 crits.

Not enough for the art, sorry. >___<;;

Thanks for the crits though.

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I HOPE THIS MAKES SENSE.
I noticed her upper arm was a little long, you might have to bend her upper torso a bit more for it to look comfortable.

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I HOPE THIS MAKES SENSE.
I noticed her upper arm was a little long, you might have to bend her upper torso a bit more for it to look comfortable.

8D;;;;;

Back to the drawing board. I wonder how much detail I can salvage. >___>;;

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Bump for updated WIP.

Started the top half over since the bottom didn't seem like it needed attention. >o>

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I like the glove and the skirt a lot .
The colors blend in well , The shoulders are a bit too big , The neck is quite long , shorten it a bit ,
And the head just a bit bigger <3
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