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I got home from theatre at twelve last night and then had an assload of dishes to do (for serious; it took me two sinks of water to clean them all and I had to spread them on the entirety of the main counterspace to dry). I was just too tired to get on. xd

@Unknown Variable: The nerd is strong with this one.

Mull of Kintyre's Mull:

17%/25% History
21%/25% Character Personality
8%/15% Physical Design
9%/10% Effort
19%/20% Originality
5%/5% Profile Execution

= 79%

Mull of Kintyre's George Michael Barrett:

18%/20% History
19%/20% Character Personality
5%/15% Physical Design
19%/20% Effort
14%/15% Originality
10%/10% Profile Execution

= 85%

Comments: That profile made me want to watch Tommy.

I wasn't actually sure what to think of Georgie at first. I read through the profile a few days ago, but I didn't have any strong opinions that surfaced through. Normally even on my first read-through of a profile I'm already finding and noticing things that I'd like to point out, but reading this one ... I didn't. Which is a good thing, I've decided. xd

The history could've used some sort of lead-up into the RP you mentioned to tie everything together a little bit -- you explained his past, his present situation, but it cut off there and I didn't get a good feel for his purpose as a character, if that makes any sense. It just seemed like it ended too soon, or something. I didn't have a feeling of me having read everything important about the character.

I can't say I come across many drug-addicted characters like this. Usually when people tend toward drug abuse/addiction in their OCs it's more of a completely negative tune, like the antagonist being a cokehead or something. I'm always a big fan of drug use not portrayed either as a D.A.R.E. sort of thing (i.e.: "only the bad people use drugs!" wink or just an excessive "Look at this character, he's so badass he takes drugs!"
And I also like how he's not a stereotypical "Duuuuude, that's trippy, maaan" stoner. Just very well done personality and history overall, I don't have any complaints. You've taken something that could've been horribly stereotypical and done a good job with it. Reminds me somewhat of Sherlock Holmes, actually, who would only take cocaine when off of a case because he was bored with the monotony of life then.
My only beef with history is, again, that it seems to cut off too soon.

Profile Execution is many points, because goddamn you wrote it in first person. I would have seriously become an hero if I had to do that. whee Not an easy thing, and definitely a nice combo of out-of-the-ordinary and effective to make it a nice read. 'Course, because of the very nature of that, it suffers from a complete lack of physical description; I can see how it would be hard to have the character kind of naturally describe himself in a profile, but I'm still curious.
And the colors didn't bother me, despite my bad vision.

So, yes, I don't really have many complaints on this profile, either. Your score is, in pretty much every category except Physical Design, nearly as high as it can get.

14/20% History - Wonderfully detailed, perhaps a little bit on the waffly side.

11/20% Character Personality - Comes through in the main body of text, but i would have preferred an objective summary.

7/15% Physical Design - I'd have appreciated you taking the time to put some description or notes with the picture, especially since I assume you found it in a catalogue somewhere.

16/20% Effort - Well-written, plenty of depth.

11/15% Originality - Teenage drug addict is nothing new, but you've created an impression of charming insouciance.

5/10% Profile Execution - Different, but not very reader-friendly.

Total = 64%

Comments; I'm looking at the profile in your journal for this, because I am goddamn slow. Unlike erika, i can't say I liked the way you put this together; I don't think it helps get the information across... as i said in an earlier comment, i want to read a profile, not a story. Although I do like your sense of humour biggrin

Mull of Kintyre -- Mull
16/25% History
17/20% Character Personality
5/15% Physical Design
15/20% Effort
8/10% Originality
6/10% Profile Execution

67% Total

Comments
Well, he too is certainly a change. It's not often you find a unique druggy such as him, and with his history, it makes sense. But it kind of feels like bits of the history are rather short, jumped about, or unlinked -- it gives the idea that he's rather trying to get through it. I have no suggestions, as it was a bit hard to grade a profile done in first person -- it's a bit different.

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